As the title of Sylvia Plath’s poem
implies, she describes pregnancy in metaphorical language. The poem contains
nine lines and each line consists of nine syllables. The images of “a melon
strolling on two tendrils” (3) could easily be mistaken for self-deprecating
humor, but I doubt that is the author’s intention. The image of a melon moving
on tendrils suggests something grotesque and repulsive to Plath. She also uses
the metaphors of “elephant,” (2) “a ponderous house,” (2) and “fat purse” (6)
to describe her condition. But there is more here than meets the eye. When
elephants are thought to have no inherent worth, they are treated like a
commodity and stripped of identity. From this grossly distorted perspective,
their only value is their tusks. Similarly, it is not the melon’s delectable red
fruit that is important; it is the seeds that are imbedded within it that are imperative
to the perpetuation of the species. The fruit is merely a vessel for carrying
seeds. The implication is clear.
The narrator of the poem, which I
presume to be Plath, is no longer seen by her peers for who she is during
pregnancy, but rather as a vessel for carrying a human embryo, no more
important than a purse in which a woman carries her valuables. Plath is demoralized
at losing her identity in a way that men cannot easily comprehend. She is on a
train that makes no stops until its destination is reached. Plath is distraught
because she realizes that pregnancy and childbirth are only the early stages of
a much longer journey of self-sacrifice and child rearing. The poem and its
author are nothing less than magnificent.
Charles, you have eloquently captured an idea that I have been thinking about all day -- this concept of a woman as a "vessel," and how despite the innately biological experience of that function of carrying a child, it becomes often a dehumanizing experience for the woman as an individual being. I think that the 7th line best demonstrates this dehumanizing sentiment: "I'm a means, a stage, a cow in calf."
ReplyDeleteEileen, thank you for your kind words. My interpretation did not come easily. I have read the poem numerous times and grappled to find the right words to express my thoughts. I want to know more about Sylvia Plath, particularly after learning about her suicide in class today.
DeleteI agree with everything you said and you expressed it eloquently. I also really like what you said about the elephant. I originally thought the elephant just represented size during pregnancy, but your interpretation of the elephant representing a commodity so a pregnant woman is not seen as a woman, just the "vessel" carrying a child.
ReplyDeleteKeegan, I am glad that you found my interpretation of Plath's "Metaphors"
Deleteinteresting.You have no idea how long it took me to write that short post this morning before coming to class. Your kindness is appreciated.